Sparkling Far in the Distance...
There was a bright light that stunned me and hurt my eyes!... I slowly stumbled up to it still really confused of what it is! I was desperate for water and food cause I've been in the desert for like 8 days I was gonna die! All I had left with some nut bars and a drip of water! I walked towards it because... why not there's no hope on me doing anything else!
As I got closer I noticed it was shiny with a piece of paper underneath it. I open the piece of paper… it was a map leading to a small village that my Dad told me about when I was little. He told me it was abandoned and there was no one left! but I was going to take my chances and go. I walked over 8 kilometres following the map. I found a small civilized Village! I was surprised so I walked in and i told them that the plane crash and everything! They supplied me with food and water and let me stay until I was rescued. I was so thankful.
About 7 months after that I got picked up and rescued from the place I started to call home! 😜
the end.
This is a quick write that was a given subject from the teacher. So a teacher gives us a sentence starter and we have to elaborate off it!
I have posted this piece of writing because... I thought I used some good vocabulary and starting to get the hang of good punctuation! Also I think that it might just reach level 3!
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